On Monday 27th March 2017 Room 7 had skateboarding for kiwisport but After recess the office said skateboarding is cancel.
After recess Room 8 ask to play basketball Room 7 and Room 8 came out side then Room 7 went on one side and Room 8 went to one side too.
Then we start to play when it was coming to the end then Room 7 won by 4 to 1. After rooom 7 won Rooom 8 was jellse then we went back.
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Explain what happened in more detail - yes we went outside. Then what?
ReplyDeleteWhat happened when it was your turn?
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