Monday, 27 March 2017

WALTmark our writing



On Monday 27th March 2017 Room 7 had skateboarding for kiwisport but After recess the office said skateboarding is cancel.


After recess Room 8 ask to play basketball  Room 7 and Room 8 came out side then Room 7 went on one side and Room 8 went to one side too.


Then we start to play when it was coming to the end then Room 7 won by 4 to 1. After rooom 7 won Rooom 8 was jellse then we went back.

The end.


Marking my story!
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Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
 
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1 comment:

  1. Explain what happened in more detail - yes we went outside. Then what?
    What happened when it was your turn?

    Try to use more difficult words and remember your full stops and capital letters.

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